Slight cleanup of documentation?

[Graham Percival]

On Sat, 12 Jan 2008 03:25:33 +1000
RGC <graemec at mysoul.com.au> wrote:

> I'm new to Mozart and Oz, and as I was looking through the
> documentation I noticed that there are a few rough edges that
> I thought indicated that English was perhaps not the first
> language of the authors.
> 
> Any other hints/advice/encouragement?

I can't speak about the Oz docs, but I've been working on the
docs for Strasheela (a project built on top of Oz).  Strasheela
has an interactive tutorial which introduces simple Oz constructs;
I found it much more understandable than the Oz tutorial.

I don't know if there's any interest in adopting the Oz-specific
parts of the interactive Strasheela tutorial for Oz itself, but it
might be helpful.  Unfortunately I can't work on this until Feb
(I have a conference deadline on Jan 25), but I would be quite
interested in helping with the Oz documentation then.

Cheers,
- Graham